Eyes of Eden

Personally one of the best endings I've ever read. It was short, sweet and to the point. You got your message across beautifully without being TOO obvious. You should think ...

The Mother of My Father The mother of my father was always a good listener ... There’s a whisper in this wind. I can sometimes hear the sweet memories of ...

It's a good start. You hooked me from the first word, "Blood" It's a great way to grab a readers attention. (And I'm NOT saying this because it's exactly how ...

Let me see if I can translate this. It sounds like it is about a guy who did not do really well in life, and some kind of holy figure ...

Um. I'm not sure if this is a bug or not but when I try to delete a blog post on my blog, it doesn't delete! It also posts twice! ...

O.K I have a question. Is this the only place to put our novel chaps? Cuz my novel chaps are all on average 15 pages/6,000 words on Microsoft word. Is ...

Will be in my book: HEL~VEN I want to see if it's emotional enough to really make people think. Time seems to be so prescious now that it's going by ...

Rei makes a point although some of the things you say in here are to "poetical" -- in search of a better term -- to be considered natural dialouge. Unless ...

Oh wow. Great job! I get the feeling that it's either about starting over or having a child. Which is it? I'm DYING to know! lol What a perfect way ...

As a pure Christian I can really apreciate this poem. The story of Adam and Eve was a great way to tell this kind of situation. A message of forgiveness ...

Completely AWESOME! I had to read the poem like 5 times over to try and figure it out but the descriptions just blew me away! Please tell me what it's ...

Haha really catchy I liked it! I really hate it when girls/guys marry someone just because of the things they have. This was like a breath of fresh air! Extremely ...

Wow, catchy and moving. Kinda makes me think twice about girls' feelings.

PREFACE If you could solve all the mysteries in this world, what would you see? Would you see great fields, filled with all those imaginary creatures in those stories you ...

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